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Did you knew? #bullfrogcounty was created in 1987 as a response to a proposed Yucca Mountain Nuclear Respository. Join CABNR’s Cooperative Extension on November 29 for our #livingwithradaition seminar. Click the link below for more.

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A man working with surveying equipment in the Underground Exploratory Studies Facilities at Yucca Mountain.

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A man working with surveying equipment in the Underground Exploratory Studies Facility at Yucca Mountain

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Did you know? Bullfrog County was created in 1987 as a response to a proposed Yucca Mountain Nuclear Repository. Join Extension, Bullfrog County’s Living With Radiation Program for a seminar on radioactive frogs Nov. 29. For more information, visit extension.unr.edu.

Photo by the Department of Energy.

University of Nevada, Reno | College of Agriculture, Biotechnology & Natural Resources | Department of Energy | #BullfrogCounty | #LivingWithRadiation

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    • Tagged/mentioned the University and College
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    • Tagged program partner who provided the photo

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